Revising your manuscript? Try a four-step approach


«Many people approach revising as if it is a single shot process. They tell themselves, «I’m just going to sit down now and revise my paper». But revising and refining a text are not one activity, they are several. The writer who thinks that revision is a onesie could be setting themselves up to feel daunted by the magnitude of what needs to be done, and potentially frustrated if it doesn’t all come together in the one big writing stint», writes science blogger Pat Thomson and goes on to cite a way of revising a manuscript.

At a minimum, revising consists of four interconnected, interlocking and circular steps:

  • reading your text;
  • diagnosing problems;
  • generating solutions – deciding on what needs to be done and in what order;
  • and re-writing.

These steps do not necessarily happen serially and separately. But they don’t always flow seamlessly into one another either. You are highly likely to need thinking time in between at least some of them. After reading and diagnosis, you may decide that you need to go back to checking out literatures or looking at your data analysis. You may also want to check your diagnosis and proposed solutions with a supervisor, a peer or writing mentor.

To avoid revising-refusal or revising-fear you can organise shortish periods of time around each of the four steps. Using shorter sessions for daunting revisions has the advantage of making the task seem more do-able. Expectations are lowered too – the writer tells themselves, «I don’t have to finish it all today. All I need to do in this writing time is to read my text and begin to identify the problems, I don’t need to do everything now». Read first and then a second writing session might see the writer read again, complete their diagnosis and begin to develop solutions. A third session might focus on textual changes and sorting out the order in which the changes need to be made. The final session(s) is tackling the text itself.

Of course it is possible to do all the steps in one go. But most of us need more time on revising than the single go. And we benefit from the mulling over spaces in between them.

You can support your revising by writing notes to yourself in the margins of your text. Or you can make a simple table to serve as a guide to writing. Your table can be broken down into chunks of time, with particular revision chunks allocated to specific diary slots.

Column headings for revising plan:

Problem in the text, page number. You can also cut and paste in the beginning and end of the text at issue. From… to…

Diagnosis

Rewriting solution

You could also add a fourth column – time and date.

Of course, it is not necessary to be so systematic. It is quite possible to move through the steps for revising without breaking the task up in this way. However, if you DO find yourself unable to start revising and find yourself gazing longingly at tempting reasons to procrastinate, then the act of developing a staged plan can help.

Making a plan means that you are taking charge of what revising you will do, how and when. You are standing back to assess and evaluate your own writing. You are putting your writer self to work on improving your text.

Source: https://patthomson.net/2021/11/01/revising-try-a-four-step-approach/

In revising your manuscript, you can also take advantage of the interesting exercise from Pat Thomson in one of our previous posts:

– Academic writing skills: the «make it better» exercise

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